Room 11 are a class of Year 2 and Year 3 students who along with their teacher Miss P, are travelling on a learning journey in 2017. Our aim is to make the most of every learning opportunity, have fun learning, achieve success in our learning and strive to be the best people we can be.
Tuesday, 21 February 2017
Heleina's Description Writing
This is Heleina’s writing about her favourite toy. She did a great job of describing it, so we know what it looks like and smells like.
My Teddy
By Heleina
My favourite toy is a teddy. It looks white and it smells like pavlova. It feels soft. It’s eyes are green and it’s eyes are circles. One ear is broken but my dad fixed it. It has a shiny nose and it has a fuzzy tail. It’s head looks big.
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