Circus Writing by Ashlyn, Kimi, Tiana, Kulraj

When we went to the circus I saw a hula hoop girl, a clown and another girl.  The hula hoop girl’s name was Americus.  She had lots of hula hoops and she had one hula hoop going around her neck, one going around her waist and one going around her leg.  She had a colourful leotard.  She was doing a handstand and she hula hooped around her foot.  It was so cool and amazing. By Ashlyn

  On Thursday 18 of May we went to the auditorium because we were watching a circus.  There was a girl.  She did hula hooping.  I liked her because she was wearing a rainbow suit. Her name is Americus.  She was hula hooping with 3 hula hoops.  I liked her because she was also good at it.  She was good at it because she did it when she was 4 but now she is 14.  She did it with her leg and foot.  She also did it with her arms and hands. By Kimi

  My funny circus clown is Americus and Meryl.  I like Americus and Meryl because they are beautiful.  I liked the part when Americus was doing the cool cool hula hoops.  She was 14.  I liked Meryl’s clothes.   She looked pretty.  She was speaking into a microphone.  She was wearing a pretty dress.  She was wearing make up on her face.  She had short hair.  Americus had lots of hula hoops on.  Her body was full of hula hoops.She got a hula hoop and she put one on her leg and then she got her hand and she got it over her head.  She also spun with the hula hoops. By Tiana

  The clown was funny and he looked like a funny clown.  He has a whistle in his mouth. By Kulraj